Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Attending children, a widely accepted in all countries as an important role for parents, should be taken the highly consideration. It may be a significant target for nations; therefore, it is believed that a training course is mandatory to well prepare the parents for this task. I partially agree with this notion, but people are ready by nature to provide all advices to their tots which maintain their behaviour in a good manner. This essay will firstly, highlight the importance of such courses to parents, children and community, and secondly, the other notion of not committing to any course by the guardian, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, Children are the future for any nation, and securing educational trainings for parents about children grown up are recommended by governments. These are provided through certified centres and under supervision of the ministry of education. Children during their early ages are very sensitive and copy every single action from their attendants; therefore, courses teach the parents the right attitudes while dealing with children. For example, an undertaken survey by a prestigious university in United Kingdom published that 90 % of parents, who attended the courses, develop children with balanced-behaviour.
On contrary, the training courses were not known in last century, and many children were taught and raised by uneducated parents. The parenting sense is acquired by nature, and it is progressively elaborated by every experienced situation. Furthermore, inherited customs and traditions have a pivotal role in raising up the toddler to be in matured personality. For instance, several scientists are grown up by a very poor and uneducated parents, and they link their success to their family.
To sum up, it is undeniable that caring children is imperative for developing the societies, but it is not the default approach among nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04128101025 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0371456005 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273358814415 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907119060573 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627673093569 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153846384768 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103281695157 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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