Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Parenting is a heavy responsibility that every parent is required to shoulder. However, to make every prospective parent undertake a course on parenthood does not seem to be a practical idea.
Firstly, not all expecting couple would be willing to attend such a course, given their hectic schedules. It could turn out to be a painful exercise for them and eventually may not learn anything out it due to lack of enthusiasm. Secondly, even if fathers and mothers are willing and able to attend such lessons, they may not agree with the methodology or the approach taught due to differences of opinion. In reality, it would be extremely difficult to prepare a content which suits everyone.
Lastly, I believe, that parenting is a skill that one learns with experience and through family, friends, society and the surrounding culture. Most people tend to become better parents by learning through their own mistakes, using trial and error approach and by understanding the requirements of their child. For instance, a couple may expose their child to different experiences to understand what makes them happy and what cranks them up. This is something that one cannot learn in a taught course.
In conclusion, in my view, forcing parents to attend mandatory lessons on parenthood is not only unnecessary but would most likely end up being a futile exercise.
- All parents want the best opportunity for their children. There are some people who think schools should teach children skills but others think having a huge range of subjects is better for a child's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 56
- In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? 61
- Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 56
- All parents want the best opportunity for their children There are some people who think schools should teach children skills but others think having a huge range of subjects is better for a child s future Discuss both sides and give your opinion 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...likely end up being a futile exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83849593126 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3363534014 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.727272727 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191261113466 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673848358758 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247615813536 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10046374478 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315670883009 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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