Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them?
As we all know that young age is most influential age of the life span hence we should control our children in a best manner. It is common to see high rates of crimes committed by children these days.There are various causes of this undesired increment. In this essay, I will discuss some causes of this increased children crime rates such as lack of parent's control and bad company. Further I will also suggest some possible ways to punish them in a decent way.
There are various factors that has encouraged children to commit crimes. The primary cause is bad company. There is a very famous quote that supports my statement, 'Man is known by the company he keeps'. Children learn a lot from their surrounding so when they get into bad company, they learn to do bad deeds and unintentionally commit crimes. Another significant reason which boost children to do criminal activities is lack of parent's attention, these days adults are busy in their hectic lifestyle, hence they do not have time to teach good lessons to their kids.
There are correction centers for juveline as well in every city, to make children realize their mistakes they should be sent there for improvement of their behavior and in order to make them a productive member of a society. Another decent way to punish those children who had committed crime is to assign them volunteer work for the society. They should be ordered to help old age people or disabled people of the society for certain period of time. This way they would help the society and become a good citizen of the country.
In conclusion, Adolescent age is the most influential age, children learn good and bad during this age. Social company and insufficient parent's control are the main causes due to which crime rate by children has increased tremendously. To teach a lesson to those children, we should send them to correction center or order them to serve society with some good deeds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78507462687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52210366674 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9217705615 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236270067487 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877985760154 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713991317077 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147380351327 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221745565987 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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