Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?.
In this day and time, children are considered as receiving tons of expectations which are not really beneficial for them. There remains several reasons that lead to their pressures and some ways can be tackled to make a contribution to eliminate them gradually.
There are so many things that cause children pressure. One of the most noticeable ones is from themselves. It is undeniable that they are living in a better world than before; therefore, when facing to the fast development of the world, they hope that they can do some contributions rather than being a failure. Furthermore, parents and society also play an important role in making them stressful. Many parents have a tendency to expect that their kids can become someone else when growing up without looking at their ability. Additionally, people surround kids also have the same thought as they want all children will behave in the way they want instead of letting children develop naturally.
It is impossible to put an end to this situation immediately, but we can join hand to reduce by taking some measurements. First and foremost, education is one of the strongest weapon that can fight against imposition of adults to their kids. All of them needs to be aware that kids are unique and each generation is a difference. Besides, school and family should support their children instead of controlling their life.
To conclude, pressures are invisible things but they affect much to children life as it comes as potential to destroy one's life. Therefore, people should have some ways together to limit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00763358779 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73787328404 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9922854917 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111701965872 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389906067796 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324415726131 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750274382956 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225124946961 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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