At the out set of new millennium, academic have become a maiden requirements to not only for getting well paid job but also for selfrespect. It is stated that, now students are facing more pressure than formative years owing to academic, social and domestic pressure is also increasing day by day on students life as well as mind. There are some more reasons that are linked with it and suggestions of tackling methods also needed. Both causes and solution will be disussed following paragraph before reaching to conclusion.
It is not deny that, After getting admission in schools and colleges teenagers are suffering from many pressures. The main reason is behind this circumstance and that parents pressurising children for those subject which they donot like to learn. Students also facing more competition from counter parts to get high marks. Owing to nowadays education is only about to get marks not to get knowledge. For instance: Only 5 per cent colleges goers able to pass NEET, General knowledge exam in government job interview. While, they have 100 per cent marks in college but, Knowledge level is low. Society only giving respect to those students which have excellent marks in therticaly. Hence, it is enough to prove that why pressure is occurring.
To curb the menace,there is a urgent necessity to take effective approaches by authorities, Teachers as well as by parents. Firstly partical method of teaching must be taken by teachers. Government should also introduce more and more healthy, IQ level competition for students. For Example: with this in India from 2019 to 2020 80 per cent students clear NEET exam. Secondly, parents should also leave decision on children that in which field they want to study. Therefore, these method can become benavolant for reducing pressure on students.
To sum up, after throwing lights on reasons and solutions. I personally feel that, there are several factor in which children feel pressure. However, by talking plausible steps as soon as possible the pressure of academic, social can be solved as a whole.
- Some believe that pupils should be given less homework others say the opposite What is your opinion 78
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they were younger Is it a positive or negative development in your own opinion To what extent do you support this development 56
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 61
- Due to increasing world demands for oil and gas energy people need to look for new sources of energy in remote and untouched natural places Do advantages of locating these sources outweigh disadvantages damaging such places 73
- Children are facing more pressure nowdays from academic social and commercial perspective What are the causes of these pressure and what measure should be taken to reduce this 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'requirement'?
Suggestion: requirement
...llennium, academic have become a maiden requirements to not only for getting well paid job b...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...essure is also increasing day by day on students life as well as mind. There are some mo...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'denied'.
Suggestion: denied
...fore reaching to conclusion. It is not deny that, After getting admission in school...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ays education is only about to get marks not to get knowledge. For instance: Only...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...essure is occurring. To curb the menace,there is a urgent necessity to take effective...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...occurring. To curb the menace,there is a urgent necessity to take effective appr...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
...ch field they want to study. Therefore, these method can become benavolant for reducing pres...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
...personally feel that, there are several factor in which children feel pressure. Howeve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09411764706 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68328802071 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3872959492 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4761904762 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20482319966 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542954597774 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484327828014 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123737042488 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378134803527 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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