Children are facing more pressure these days from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressure.
Children are in tremendous pressure now a days, not just to excel in studies but also in sports or extra curricular activities. The major factor responsible for such an intense situation is the mindset of their parents itself.
Rather than encouraging their child to do what they like and enjoy childhood, parents are pushing their kids to work beyond their mental and physical capability to fulfill their own dreams and fuel their pride. For example, if a girl is very good in soccer, it is pointless to enroll her in music class just because her parents couldn't become a singer. Is this a rational expectation ? Certainly not to me and I believe not anyone !
For a child to succeed in life, parent should come out of the orthodox thinking and the should leave the kid free for choosing his/her aspirations and career path. After all, at the end of the day it's the kid who should be satisfied about what he is doing in life rather than the society. If the young ones are choosing their own area of interest, their would not be imbalance in the competitive exams, however parents are encouraging their children to select a specific field such as Engineering or Medical, just because it is highly paying career.
Not to mention, the school management is also playing a vital role in building the future of a child. In addition to the studies, they should also focus on making the kid a better person and nurture his/her hobbies and interests.
School should not pressurize children to do their homework instead they should make efforts to make school a fun place where they will learn to grow together and not envy or compete with each other.
To conclude, I would say parents and school should focus on making their child happy and finding the hidden talent. Because, every child is special.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
Children are in tremendous pressure now a days, not just to excel in studies but also ...
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Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...Children are in tremendous pressure now a days, not just to excel in studies but also ...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...in music class just because her parents couldnt become a singer. Is this a rational exp...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... path. After all, at the end of the day its the kid who should be satisfied about w...
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Line 10, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ld happy and finding the hidden talent. Because, every child is special.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, after all, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76357827476 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44622899198 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4512782342 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904762415514 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317272557303 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356590033604 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477328529628 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301975282065 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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