Children should always follow their parents' advice. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 175 words.
Some people said that children should always obey their parents' advice when they are young and when they become older, they can make decisions by themselves to be more independent.
On the one hand, young people do not know what to do, what is right or wrong. And only their parents can teach them about that. All parents want to give the best things for theirs ' children, so their advice can make children better. If young people do not obey their parents' advice, they can have bad behaviors and even be in dangerous situation.
On the other hand, making decisions make children more independent. If they rely on their parents, they will not make decisions by themselves and fail when their parents do not help them. The mistakes and failures are the best way to be mature. The older they are, the more responsible with what they did they are.
In conclusion, parents' advice should be obeyed by their offsprings. I think it is good for children' maturation and they can become responsible members of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74576271186 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36156840479 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9641694969 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3636363636 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168638748758 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078774673656 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504263770506 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121950905293 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424693372683 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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