Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that children thrived in the affluent family are solving problems in adult life better than the destitute one . From my perspective , i both agree and disagree with this statement . on the on hand , children , born in the insufficient environment , have to get access to society and earn a living from their early age . By doing so , they could ,meeting new people from the upper class to the middle one , acquire a variety of knowledges and experiences through selling goods . In addition , by approaching with the society early , children are able to enhance their independent routine and are not easy to fall behind later in life . Thuch Salik can be seen as a clear example . This boy , from Cambodia , could speak ten languages due to the fact that he learnt such languages from travellers and could gain valuable knowledge for his personal life . On the other hand , Solving problems partly comes from knowledges and experiences . As mentioned above , children grown up in the poor need to make a living from very young age and hence they would not have enough times to get rolling in the school or can not go to school due to their financial situation. As a result , most of their times is inclined to earn money for parents , thus they could lack knowledges in a specific area of work , and this might be their shortcomings To conclude , everything would have two sides of it , so children growing up in the underprivileged family do not mean that they would handle problems better than the wealthy one . Thus I both agree and disagree with this demonstration .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78148148148 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6484729488 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1019648752 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215027496125 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818330498775 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678197699192 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215027496125 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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