In the modern era, everyone is busy in their career and goals and they do not have enough time to know their neighbor in a proper way as well as, more and more masses are leading self-centered lives. I will explain some causes and solutions.
To begin with, every person have a very busy time as well, people more prefer to do work in free-time for good future and, they want the best position in their office or workplace. For example:- most of the masses do work late hours and, sometimes they left their own family as well as, other relations. Moreover, another cause is new technology like as every age group uses mobile phones and they do all work on it with it, they connect with dear once’s with help of it due to it people do not have time for knowing about their neighbor.
On the other hand side, this problem is not as simple as compared to other troubles. Head of society should provide a small park and organize different sort of activities as well as, thing with it, all neighbors easily meet with their neighbors and, they properly come to know about them. For example:- folks should take the time off on festivals and celebrate them together as well as, every society has organized lunch or dinner for everyone. Furthermore, all parents encouraged their children to play outdoor games with other muppets.
In conclusion, everyone forgets the importance of community and, people are busy in other activities. So, individuals meet with their new neighbors and do help in different sorts of works with it, everybody easily knows about their neighbors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...have enough time to know their neighbor in a proper way as well as, more and more masses are le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76277372263 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41751615448 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543795620438 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3178754227 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151498891614 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066209477153 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396057345521 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107407931457 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328471791121 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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