City dwellers don't tends to develop close relationship with neighbor.
Why this is so?
What can be done to improve between neighbor within city?
In the modern world, people are not showing interest in developing relationship with neighbor. this is due to the present lifestyle and lack of time. most probably, people are running behind money to sustain in the world. these kinds of behavior lead to isolation of people who is indirectly impacting society. so effective participation in function or festival will end this kinds of problem.
Firstly, present lifestyle causes many problems to the country, in that neighbor relationship plays the major role. Now a days, people do not know who is staying next to them. this is because of their job type. such as, many employees working in night shift and sleeping in daytime. Moreover, lack of involvement in celebration will break relationship. In addition to that crime rate increased in past few decades due to the no relation with others. the recent report days, people who are in the strong bonding with other which proven no crime happen.
In order to develop connection between the people, they should be effectively take part in function or festival. this will create a better bonding with others which leads to form a good society. Also, they can share the happiness by giving sweets or gifts during any birthday parties. Moreover, good relationship will be benefited for a person to person help in terms of jobs. Even they should develop mindset to support other during any emergency or help needed.But at present parents are restrict their children not to play with other who are living at the same apartment, this should be avoid in future.
To conclude, people should spend their quality time with others which will help to form great community. A good country rely on the people who are living in healthy environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57947676047 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2717358082 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5263157895 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151056120262 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463778746533 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467894714307 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867875153556 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413695188853 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.