The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Since 1970, there is an ongoing debate between many people that animals have rights. While it is possible to claim that zoos should be banned because we are hurting them by caging it, my view is that zoos are nurturing and helping animals.In this essay I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are several reasons why wildlife sanctuaries should not be closed.One of them is that it helps to preserve the wildlife which are on the verge of extinction.It can also be argued that some animals which are abandoned by its mother needs additional attention and care to nurture them . For example, According to a survey conducted by "The Hindu" magazine, it is found that the population of Bengal Tigers in the Ghir National Park has increased by 2%. Moreover, it helped to save the endangered species.
Those who argue for the closure of zoos have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing Firstly, It is claimed that animals have a wild characteristics and it is not safe to grow them in zoos. In addition, it is also said that they are predators so it should be kept far away and untouched by humans.Then there are concerns about its wild behaviour. To exemplify, In China, a man accidentally fell into the cage of white tigers. He was devoured by those animals and lost his life.
To conclude, though there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that wildlife sanctuaries helps animals than hurting it. I would strongly recommend to have more zoos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74817518248 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62372141234 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0174730189 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327844169547 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102178911218 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073283225107 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187832495284 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836606979689 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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