Computers are being used more and more in education.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, computers are vastly used in schools and colleges for educational purposes.Some of the institutes encourage students to use computers for their assignments and practical work. This essay will discuss the potential search ability of a computer as an advantage and secondly, health issues as disadvantage of the use of the computer in an educational system.
To begin with, the prime advantage of using computers for study is that it is the most efficient and quickest way to inquire about anything. Furthermore, the students will be able to find ton of information online using various search engines. For instance, Google is one of the most common website which can provide the necessary insights on a selected topic. So, the computers, as a result of this, have became an encyclopedia of knowledge which proved to be quite useful during recent times.
The leading demerit of using computer in educational facilities is the overuse of this technology. The excessive use of it can be detrimental to the eye vision which in turns lead to several health issues. For instance, the recent study in UCLA proved that the kids who spend most of the time sitting in front of the screen have severe vision problems. Therefore, these children might end up suffering from social instability in the near future as they might end up staying home all the time.
Thus, with above in mind, we can conclude that the computers can act as boon or bane depending upon the usage . In my opinion, the positives of computer usage in schools outweigh the drawbacks caused by it as it is quite an effective method for learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95588235294 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75356539696 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1460811577 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18982175058 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706946354381 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553317987918 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114920258848 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559541504039 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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