A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country.
Where should this visitor go on that day? Why?
Use specific reasons and details to support your choice
Traveling is one of the most efficient way to spend time with your family and friends along with witnessing different places around the world. Similarly, people usually travel to relax which would allow them to come back to work with extra vigor after a well-deserved break. On the same note, there are plenty of tourists that visit the beautiful country of India on regular basis.
I am from India and if I have to recommend a place to a tourist for one day visit, it surely would be Golden Temple. To begin with, the Golden temple is one of the most enthralling sites for the tourists, especially during the night. For instance, you can easily see an amazing reflection of pure gold in the water surrounding the temple. Further along, the relaxing sounds of God's praises sung inside the building make it a breathtaking experience of a lifetime.
Furthermore, there is an exhibition involving the depiction of various historical events which makes it even extra appealing to visitors. On the same note, the events such as historical plays will be held to entertain the audience along with passing a religious message to the crowd. Also, there will always be a free food service where anyone can come and eat, no matter which caste or religion he belongs to.
In conclusion, the Golden temple is one of the attractions that come to my mind if I have to recommend to a tourist. In addition, the most attractive views along with a historical significance make it a must watch destination in my country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... breathtaking experience of a lifetime. Furthermore, there is an exhibition invo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78544061303 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68975886975 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 12.5951930866 49.4020404114 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600295934887 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212462861186 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313134959437 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354080067923 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215109238981 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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