Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Nowadays, personal information about a candidate is requested such as hobbies, interests, and marital status during the application submission of a job. It is often argued that this is an irrelevant information, while others disagree and think this might be vital in the selection of an applicant. In my opinion, it is completely fine to request for private insights of a human being and this essay will also discuss both views.
To begin with, people applying to job sites must enter certain facts pertaining to their private life so that employers can better understand the social aspect of an individual. It is therefore agreed that revealing these details could be crucial for some employers as few companies make their decision based on these criteria. For instance, a part of multinational companies only prefers to hire single people due to their willingness to relocate as compared to a couple. It is therefore agreed that providing your relationship status along with your interests could prove to be a significant factor in choosing the right candidate.
On the other hand, many disagree and feel that presenting the personal identity is not related to the job requirement and a job seeker shouldn’t be deemed qualified or disqualified based on these filters. However, employers can easily search the history of an applicant through numerous platforms. For example, Linkedin/Facebook are one of the most effective tools that can be used to determine the professional and confidential traits of a person, even if the full biodata is not provided.
While part of the population still argues about the judging criteria of a work application, some still feel a job seeker should not need to be afraid of portraying their life particulates during this cycle. However, if such kind of criteria is only used to determine the social status required for a job, the benefits of using personal facts are clearly positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if the full biodata is not provided. While part of the population still argue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16242038217 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96699254267 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.7020635501 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.083333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277080191984 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909478160324 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031676839622 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154435798994 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320337938423 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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