As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree
Computer is fast becoming an indispensable teaching tool in the education sector. The burgeoning demand to cut class time and increase efficiency in learning has encouraged the use of computers. It seemed rational to envisage the total overhaul of teachers in the class room for computers someday. This argument in my candid opinion will not be able to hold water because of the intricacies of certain engaging course subject and a whole lot of distractions posed by the internet.
The introduction of computer-based-education system marked a moment of epiphany in this sector.There were advancements in online classes, exams and even certifications via computer. This approach did not only reduced cost of attending lectures physically but it also saved time and stress encountered in an on-campus classes. This trend craved for one fervid question; 'Why not computerize the whole education system?. On the contrary, the computer based model is only limited to few courses like public health, business administration and few others, where its successes were renowned while other courses like health sciences, engineering and agricultural sciences are more inclined to a practical based education system. These sciences deal mainly on practical issues with the supervisors in hand to perfect the skills student learns. Practices actually makes perfect. Delicate subjects like incision in surgery cannot be possibly taught online or learnt via you tube without a practical handler insight to tutor medical students. Therefore, a face to face contact must be ensured there for efficient transmission of knowledge from the teacher to students. This practical approach will serve as the major downturn to the complete installation of computers as teacher in the near future.
Furthermore, the internet is widely known as a recreational apparatus and it is rigged with junks that serve as a source of distraction to students. Social media sites like Facebook and twitter are currently the most visited sites in the world, with larger chunk of the visitors young people of school age. It is rather inevitable to neglect this fact as research in recent year have shown online graduates ranking low in the list of candidates with employable skills. Considering this factor, efforts were made to encourage students to attend classes on campus than online.
To sum up, computer based form of education presents a class act approach to the transmission of knowledge but will not be able to completely phase out teaching in class because of the more pragmatic approach of teaching some technical courses and also plethora forms of distractions that accompany online learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3723150358 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01354400567 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596658711217 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8791818847 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.055555556 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151459621946 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421327313561 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427752392988 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911629903071 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530771286905 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.