Contrasting views about which problem is more predominant in cities.
There has been a contrasting views among certain demographic s of the society about which is the most difficult hardship encountered by urban cities. In my opinion, I believe the growing number of automobiles are of major concern because it leads to perpetual traffic and pollution. Although, there are other challenges apart from the one orchestrated by vehicles, such as security and social amenities.
Despite, that there has been a consistent increase in the hazards caused by a large number of motors on our highways, insecurity and lack of essential facilities are equally a major setbacks. Firstly, security is a major cause that needs to be tackled. There is an increase in the number of burglary and theft and many people cannot even venture out at night because of fear of being robbed or even kidnapped . In addition, we do not have enough social facilities to cope with an ever-growing number of population in cities. Many hospitals lack essential equipments and a host of others do not even have enough qualified medical personnels . For instance, there has been a recent survey on the available hospitals in cities and the survey shows that an average hospital needs a minimum of 20 doctors and 30 nurses but many of the health facilities could barely boast of up to 50% of the required officials.
However, the major concern of ever-increasing number of vehicles cannot be underestimated. Most importantly, traffic and pollution are imminent danger. To start with, traffic congestion is a Paramount difficulty associated with automobiles, it is a time waster and an impending health reason because people spend a lot of time in traffic which affects their health. In addition, various kinds of pollutions such as carbon monoxide emissions from fumes and noise pollution from car hornings is also worrisome.
In conclusion, although different people have different opinions about whether increase in number of vehicles is a crucial problem or other problems are of major concern in towns. I opine that the number of vehicles on roads, has exploded to an alarming figure, such that it is now a major health issue and a potential economic disaster.
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed down because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. 61
- You work for an international company and would like to work at its head office for six months. 78
- Describe a problem with the equipment you bought recently and how you want the problem solved. Write a letter to the company 89
- There have been several complains about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. 89
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'view'?
Suggestion: view
There has been a contrasting views among certain demographic s of the soci...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...stent increase in the hazards caused by a large number of motors on our highways, insecurity and ...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'setback'?
Suggestion: setback
...ssential facilities are equally a major setbacks. Firstly, security is a major cause tha...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f fear of being robbed or even kidnapped . In addition, we do not have enough soci...
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have enough qualified medical personnels . For instance, there has been a recent s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11830985915 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88591814962 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1888041686 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.133333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101470785105 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341019879957 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793377596646 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747873338904 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649548169832 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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