The effect of globalization is transforming the entire world and many countries are becoming similar due to the ability to purchase same products across the world. This has led to many positive and few negative development.
I will shed some light on both the sides and extend my support to the former before arriving at a conclusion.
Firstly the ease of buying products from anywhere which makes the countries similar diminishes discrimination in my view. For instance, an Indian living in the US is able to buy Indian food from the restaurants there or even purchase and wear Indian traditional clothes which allows the people in US to first of all know a bout Indian culture and food and accept them thus eradicating differences. This also allows the immigrants feel they are in their home-town and feel comfortable in a new country. Secondly, it also paves way for new inventions or creation as the goods are similar everywhere and therefore new products be introduced and the old ones be obsolete giving rise to competition in the market. Thirdly, there are various products due to its easy and similar productivity might dip its prices which will give an opportunity to average or low income class people a chance to use it for example, cell phones, computers etc. With its many advantages of the world becoming a global village it also comes with its side effects. Amidst all this somewhere down the line people are forgetting their own culture and tradition. It is being lost eventually with and finally might disappear one day.
To recapitulate globalization has more pros than cons and it has made the life easier, simpler and luxurious of many people. In the end this is all that matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87586206897 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74673300698 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8677047672 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238853754294 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749153267141 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624438996717 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12478155898 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960189250133 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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