Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?
Since the world has become a global village, all the nations across globe are less distinctive while their natives are purchasing identical goods. This essay considers this trend to be quite beneficial for the consumers as they can enjoy the diversity of products as well as producer who may have paths to sell their goods.
Initiating with the major reason, as the products travel from one nation to another, it has offered a great opportunity to customer that they can enjoy variety in every product. In other words, brands popular in one nation can be bought by the natives of other nation which has removed boundaries of any kind. For instance, the clothing fashion is quite alike in whole world as the brands namely, H&M, Balenciaga etcetera has opened their outlets in every nook and corner of the world, enabling fashion-freaks to enjoy what is in vogue. Thus, the whole world enjoys the trends around the world.
Apart from this, the doors for trade opportunities have been opened by every nation that has been seen as lucrative by producers since they would be able to export the goods to far corner of the world. In its return, they would be able to earn foreign exchange that is certainly going to lead to profitable business. This could be illustrated from the fact that spices from India are exported around the world that has added a huge revenue to this country’s economy. Therefore, becoming identical means progression of nation.
To reiterate, it can be said that purchasing similar products is a sign of peace and harmony between the nations and this is most advantageous in promoting consumerism along an encouragement to business opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85053380783 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54574042592 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 281.0 20.2975951904 1384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1363.0 106.682146367 1278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 281.0 20.7667163134 1353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 91.0 7.06120827912 1289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106412509332 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106412509332 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065793706139 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114696298197 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.9 13.0946893788 1084% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -205.28 50.2224549098 -409% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 111.7 11.3001002004 988% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.72 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.4 10.1190380762 1131% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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