Countries around the world will be facing significant challanges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well What problems will your country face in next ten years How can these problems be overcome
This fact cannot be denied that with the development and advancement in every sector like technology, education, medicine, etc. All nations are also facing many threats in terms of environment, education and overpopulation at high rate. This essay will discuss the problems faced by my country in next decade with some viable ways to curb it.
There are plethora of dangers people will face but the chief among of them is overpopulation. India has become the second highest country of overpopulation. Due to this people will face many problems related to job, food and house. Hence, people will become unemploy and frustrated. To overcome their stress, they will start taking drugs where they use their positive energy in wrong direction like robbery, murder for their survival.
Moreover there will be contamination of environment from the emission of air from traffic, factories and so on. Also, there will be a disposal of toxic waste from factories in the water bodies which is likely to exert many health problems like heart attack, asthma, etc. Overall, it will impairs the quality of life and reduces its expectancy. Furthermore, the other major concern will be in comming generation is non availability for non renewable resources for future which will lead to stagnation in business. Therefore, it will raise inflation and economy of whole nation will be stuck.
However, there are some solutions through which this problem can be reduced in future. Firstly there should be an international organisation which monitors the usage of non renewable of all nations so that these can be retained for future generation. Masses also put efforts to save the environment like use car pooling, energy saving products, recyable products and reduces garbage. In addition, Authorities should put restrictions on the emission of air and waster disposal from factories and serve strict punishment to offenders.
In conclusion, this problem can be eradicated if decisions about solving problem taken at international level and implemented at national and individual level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34756097561 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84404650725 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5425684316 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326684165514 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100971823192 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582791710755 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170717607913 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377775406431 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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