Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is an undoubted fact that one of the fatal challenges to the world are population and education system along with environmental issues. The world is struggling with over population that consequently results in sub-standard life style and illiteracy. I shall discuss the issues related to population and education and how we can make a mitigation plan proactively.
Predominantly, population issue is at an alarming rate in most of the underdeveloped countries such as India and Pakistan and developed countries like China. Over population leads to scarcity of resources hence results in poor living standards and people deprived of basic necessities of life. As per the latest studies, 50% of the population in China is forced to live in bunker like homes as they cannot afford to have a proper flat or house. Another rising issue is the lack of education, people do not have sufficient resources to meet basic requirements and make children to earn from an early age so that everyone in the house shares the financial responsibility. According to the recent research more than 60% of masses in India are illiterate as they cannot afford to go to school.
In order to overcome such issues, Government has to play a vital role. First and foremost, stringent enforcement on population control plan is required. Every couple should only be allowed to have maximum 2 kids. Alongside, government should provide free schooling till elementary and should make it mandatory for all the kids to attend the school.
To recapitulate, it goes without saying that we live in a world with ever growing issues such as pollution, population and education but it is our responsibility to take corrective measure to make it a better world for living. Otherwise, these issues will be uncontrollable in the later stages if not stopped in the right time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...living standards and people deprived of basic necessities of life. As per the latest studies, 50%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05921052632 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01840355843 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585526315789 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7613113005 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160891355334 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536673669888 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425784239165 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978366825463 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392775148017 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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