World is experiencing a huge increase in population and accommodating increasing number of people is currently one of the greatest challenges being faced by the countries around the globe. According to many experts, most cities around the world are overpopulated and therefore I believe creating new towns is the dire need of the day.
Some people believe that accommodating new people in the existing cities is the better option due to various reasons. First of course is from the cost stand point as there is existing urban infrastructure available which only needs further expansion to handle the growing population of inhabitants unlike developing new towns for which the development has to be started from scratch thus would be a more costly option. Secondly, the economical base is something which cannot be created overnight i.e. the local industry and employment base tend to stay in the existing city limits and even so if people move to new towns, have to come back to city for work thus would not be an ideal scenario for them to commute for longer times compared to living in the existing city limits.
In contrast to the above more and more people are sold to the need of new towns being developed in the outskirts of exiting cities to handle the population explosion as it offers far more benefits than accommodating people in the existing city boundaries. Most importantly new towns will reduce the population density of the existing cites and will have the positive lifestyle effect on the lives of existing city inhabitants. Secondly new towns tend to create the new spirit of town, which leads to cultural diversification in country i.e. by opening of new restaurants, fun places etc. Furthermore there is a positive effect of new towns on overall economy as well, as people would like to earn their livelihoods near their home, which drives the greater entrepreneurial spirit and thereby creating a new economic base of the town, and generate local employment.
In the light of the above arguments I am convinced that benefits of accommodating increasing population in new towns far outweigh the option of settling them inside the existing limits of the cities
- A country is experiencing population growth and needs more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in the existing cities or should new towns be built for this purpose? Explain. 64
- A country is experiencing population growth and needs more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in the existing cities or should new towns be built for this purpose? Explain. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 434, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... be a more costly option. Secondly, the economical base is something which cannot be creat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, even so, in contrast, of course, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04132231405 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82696444055 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490358126722 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1697341802 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373217408436 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162703238346 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468938623229 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226870223542 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070954562719 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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