Creativity should should be free from restrictions and given the freedom to flourish. Artists who wish to express their ideologies irrespective of their stream must not be restrained by the government. This essay shall argue that in doing so, it will make people aware and encourage transparency.
To begin with, all citizens have the right to express and the government cannot pose any hindrance. Those who are creative, persevere to portray the truth using a myriad of mediums such as music, pictures, words, etc. In order to make it more appealing to the audience, they avoid sugar coating the facts, and explain in layman language. For example, films made on history, expose the situations and sightings that were hidden away from public knowledge. Thus, creating public awareness and as such if the government intervenes, the truth will never see the light of day.
Furthermore, this formulates transparency as their work is publicly available and open to judgement and criticism. Governments try to conceal facts which would show them in the bad light and create unpleasing circumstances. Artists, are unbiased and carry out a lot of research in the background before drawing conclusions. For instance, many testimonies and surveys are carried out before writing a book on a controversial topic. Once, all the material is accumulated and carefully reviewed it progresses to publication.
In conclusion, it is absolutely imperative that creators be given the freedom to express with government interference as it is a constitutional right. All in all being creative is a time consuming process, and the outcome may not always be favorable. Although, repercussions of too much freedom may prove to be fatal, every individual must be given a chance to put forth their ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
Creativity should should be free from restrictions and given the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24825174825 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02601117084 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.7934668059 49.4020404114 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294507454873 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777720781652 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780979140756 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163109982578 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107360176722 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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