The crime rate nowdays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve a crime . Do you agree or disagree ?
In this world of urbanisation , crime control is become a major concern in last decade. Although the modern technology provides latest tools and lots of equipment which helps in solving the criminal cases , it does not decreases the crime rate. In this essay , I will discuss about the facts which describes why i am absolutely dissagreed with the above statement.
Pitching into the first area of discussion , the most predominant aspect which technology provides is Global Positioning system also known as GPS. It provides the location of any vehicle in which it is installed which helps cops to search their target. For example , according to recent research of Bhutan university, about 95% car stolen cases have been solved by GPS system i recent years. In addition to this , installation of CCTV cameras makes easier to arrest thefts and murderers . For instance, in Delhi about 95% murderers caught buy surveillance camera footage. So , technology not only provides technical systems , it also helps in watching crime suspects.
Despite of benefits of machinery tools , it is not able to control the crime rate. Many people commits illegal activities for their need as there is huge unemployment worldwide. Although computers and internet provides comfort to customers to make easy transaction via internet banking, it also stimulates hackers to hack customers' password and transfer huge amount of money in just a single click. It can be seen by recent research organised by Harvard University which states that 200% crime has been increased in last decade due to advancement of mechanics. Moreover , while , it has become convenient to withdraw money by Automatic Teller Machine, it has been easily hacked by robbers and hackers these days.
In conclusion , while technology helps in solving criminal cases , it also support to commit crime easily which stimulates criminals to do banking frauds, hacking social server accounts and many more. This essay discussed the facts why crime rate has not been decreased even the involvement of latest applied science and scientific support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34193548387 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77085221883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5134803481 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757911519635 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620922010738 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1531235429 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469290112438 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.