In this day and age, very few people are walking compare to the early era and it has to be encouraged among them to prefer more steps rather using the updated technologies. The following paragraph illustrates the various reasons for its causes and precautions that an individual can take and should walk on a daily basis.
Firstly, speedy development in the transport is also one of the reason for the less walking instances bus, taxis, motor car likewise. While looking at the old generation people used to walk not only lesser distance but also long, where you hardly find these kind of mentality in the man. On the other hand, construction of the buildings or showrooms provided with the elevators could also be another reason. Street path in the road is quite much narrower as well, parking facilities is also being given if we go in any of the places for example, Malls, Theatre, any entertainment or historical locations as so on.
There is no denying that, man has reached at the moon with its vast development in the innovations, despite of the fact, individual must remember that, health is very important and precious. Its due to that, people are adopted with the new technologies and leaving the old following of walking and leading to the consequences of health issues could be cancer, hypertension, diabeties in the same way. People should take a time regular exercises walking, jogging and so on to keep them healthy along with proper diet.
To summarise, whilst the innovations and technologies has been developed in the world, while health is very significant. It is universally quotes - "Health is wealth" rest comes later.
In this day and age, very few people are walking compare to the early era and it has to be encouraged among them to prefer more steps rather using the updated technologies. The following paragraph illustrates the various reasons for its causes and precautions that an individual can take and should walk on a daily basis.
Firstly, speedy development in the transport is also one of the reason for the less walking instances bus, taxis, motor car likewise. While looking at the old generation people used to walk not only lesser distance but also long, where you hardly find these kind of mentality in the man. On the other hand, construction of the buildings or showrooms provided with the elevators could also be another reason. Street path in the road is quite much narrower as well, parking facilities is also being given if we go in any of the places for example, Malls, Theatre, any entertainment or historical locations as so on.
There is no denying that, man has reached at the moon with its vast development in the innovations, despite of the fact, individual must remember that, health is very important and precious. Its due to that, people are adopted with the new technologies and leaving the old following of walking and leading to the consequences of health issues could be cancer, hypertension, diabeties in the same way. People should take a time regular exercises walking, jogging and so on to keep them healthy along with proper diet.
To summarise, whilst the innovations and technologies has been developed in the world, while health is very significant. It is universally quotes - "Health is wealth" rest comes later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ce but also long, where you hardly find these kind of mentality in the man. On the other h...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...path in the road is quite much narrower as well, parking facilities is also being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, look, so, well, while, as to, for example, kind of, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07581227437 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81859265809 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.330043351 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396432431904 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134489422936 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203909761416 0.0667982634062 305% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263312070046 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.327307961752 0.056905535591 575% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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