Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Support your opinion with reasons examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Deforestation is becoming increasingly serious in many nations. Although deforestation causes terrible environmental damage around the world, there are some ways to tackle this issue successfully. In my opinion, recycling and education can be used for reduction of tree cutting, and, consequently, can decrease the deforestation level.
First step in dealing with deforestation is recycling wood waste. People use a huge number of things which are produced from wood, for instance, houses, furniture, paper and so on. Of course, wood in most of them cannot be replaced by another material, but they can be recycled and utilized thereafter. Therefore, nations must establish and maintain not only the logging industry, but the recycling industry too. Moreover, individuals must be in charge for recycling their household waste. For example, my family participates in collecting waste paper in our neighborhood every year and encourage other people to do the same. Collected waste is recycled and utilized as paper bags and boxes. This approach inhibits logging increase and deforestation in our country.
Next, education must be involved in addressing the problem of deforestation. Today’s pupils and students must be educated about the forests` fells, its reasons and detrimental consequences for our world, so they can resist issue. One particularly clear example here is a special course about pollution at my university. Students are taught how to avoid wasting this planet's resources, including the forests. In addition, the government can also use infomercials to educate the citizens. This is a good approach, because they can alert all citizens about damaging effects of deforestation.
In conclusion, deforestation is a serious issue because it causes harmful effects on the environmental and our future. The best approach to deal with it are to recycle wood waste, and also to educate people about its damaging effects by using educational institutions and public service advertising.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tudents are taught how to avoid wasting this planets resources, including the forest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1628623003 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3246433733 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8947368421 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198147164875 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615532206026 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393644739193 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128816437656 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487111243051 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.