In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
Irrefutably, in this contemporary era, change is a part of life and is always required for the progress of mankind. These days, people live longer than ever before where they have advancements in the medical field. However, it has a double-edged sword and this essay would shed light on the valid standpoints and analysis of development in the forthcoming paragraph.
To commence with, abundant of problems can be drawn by the advancements in the medical field especially in the developed countries around the world. Firstly, the government has increased the pensions who are aged 65 and above. hence, they have a lack of employment for the industrial department. Secondly, the authority has to raise the immigration around the world and hence they would fulfill the skilled worker. To exemplify, research of oxford university state that in Canada and the USA are both countries, 20% of immigration surged from last five years. As a result, they would maintain their employment.
Nowadays, the government has imposed laws about higher tax as well as they could change the retirement age. As it is mentioned, the health of people get better, hence they could continue a productive working life. furthermore, the government should encourage immigration in order to grow the manpower who pay taxes. then, it is useful to invest money to advertise as well as boost bonuses for the couple to make more babies.
In the final reckoning, this essay tends to reiterate that although advancement in technology life expectancy is rising around the developed countries, it has a plethora of evil consequences, which would be facing by aging people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, then, well, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14981273408 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88880364414 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2820944397 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171157493313 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051544509131 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449120061937 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101922249276 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267558943014 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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