In the modern world, due to the incessant growth in the technology, the mean life expectancy of an ordinary person has also risen which in turn has lead to a slew of difficulties for a mediocre family and the world at large. This essay will shed some light on the fatal consequences of it.
To embark upon, the most lethal side effect of it is that the natural resources are decreasing at a very rapid rate. Our planet has got limited resources such as drinking water, food and fuel etc required for the survival of circumscribed population. But due to the unceasingly increased population, we will soon be deprived from the basic necessities needed to sustain. For example, in my country according to the recent analysis done, after twenty years only two gallon of water will be available for one person for the entire day which is quite lamentable.
Additionally, it will give rise to increased air and noise pollution and will thus cause many health issues. Also, more and more agricultural land will be taken up by the builders to construct housing colonies to provide shelter to the enormously large crowd and this will in turn elevate the cost of living. Furthermore, it will lead to depression as well because I have observed in my neighborhood itself many children are bound to keep their parents in Old age homes just because they are incapable of accommodating them in their small house and also they are not able to bear the load of their expenses too. This situation is present worldwide and it is very deplorable therefore, demands utmost attention.
To elucidate, I would like to mention assertively that government should take strict action against those who do not abide by the law of having only two children in a family and rather have eight to ten children. Moreover, awareness should be spread among the public to utilize the resources judiciously . Last but not the least, employment should be provided to all the citizens so that they can take care of their family members properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quired for the survival of circumscribed population. But due to the unceasingly i...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...tion, we will soon be deprived from the basic necessities needed to sustain. For example, in my c...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gallon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'gallons'.
Suggestion: gallons
...lysis done, after twenty years only two gallon of water will be available for one pers...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lic to utilize the resources judiciously . Last but not the least, employment shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347826087 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69455317132 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620289855072 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4520830223 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176564352399 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564593874023 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412947291143 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994016356937 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486791620906 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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