Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some people believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give our opinion.
It is true that modern technology have numerous negative impact on environment. Some people believe that these problems can be addressed by living a simple life while others suppose that technology is the way to tackle these problems. In my point of view, I agree that technological achievement play a vital role in reducing environmental problem nowadays.
On one hand, Living a simpler lives should be encouraged for all residents to solve problems due to some reasons. Firstly, the increasing of travel by vehicle and fly is a major which causes global warming. For example, cars contributes various emission directly to the air which allows gases trap the heat from the sun to raise the temperature in the world. Therefore, commuting to work by bikecycle or public bus is a good way to reduce air pollution. In addition, saving the power consumption is an essential measure to lessen problems of environment. This could be because instead of using many hours air conditions or the light which cost various fossils fuels to generate the electricity, we can go out for a walk which might help both our health better as well as saving natural energy.
On the other hand, technological achievement play an important roles in tackling environmental problems. First and foremost, mordent technology allows waste materials to be recycled to create the heat which provides warm air for people in the winter time. For example, Sweden always have to import waste materials for their factory in oder to run recycling constantly to produce electricity. Furthermore, advances in technology helps people create electricity without using fossil fuels. For example, people are going to use renewable energy sourse like solar, wind just to name a few to generate electricity.
In conclusion, although living a simpler lives can deal with environmental problem in certain level it seems to me that advance technology have an important role to play in lessening problems of environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64797507788 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.57634831667 2.80592935109 306% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5067246702 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.866666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315397401079 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970542725596 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886554752954 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175907602897 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103720234948 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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