Directions of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employers' organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent.
There is a different level of salary between managers and employees, who always receive less money. Besides, employers have an opinion that the best management talent is very important for companies in a global market. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, a manager impacts on benefits in a corporation, for their decision can make the efficiency of business operations. Especially, directors of large companies have to work more and more to solve many problems. This is the reason why directors always get well-paid, which is much bigger than normal workers. For example, when I watched the interviews of directors working in multinational companies, such as Apple, Facebook and Amazon. They said that they got much more stressful day by day, it is because many problems need their decisions. It is not easy to receive a high salary.
On the other hand, employers should hire managers who has not only talent but also great knowledge. There are many different things among countries in the world, so a director has to get an extensive awareness. Moreover, the talent is suitable for the business lines of corporation. A good illustration of this is employers should not be a management talent in industrial production if their business is in technology, such as Facebook or Google. Directors also have soft skills, which is necessary to manage employees and service customers.
In conclusion, employers of large enterprises pay a lot of money for directors receiving higher wage growth than normal workers. It is important to hire the management talent, which is suitable for employers' business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ent but also great knowledge. There are many different things among countries in the world, so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22900763359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93756288158 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4360576557 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26286646961 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814434432804 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628089424789 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16944805335 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482847996501 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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