In recent years, number of divorced families and family breakdowns are exposed to a progressive rise. Many people agree that families are not as close as it used to be. The examination of the basis of this issue and possible acts need to be taken to tackle the detrimental effects are discussed in this essay.
Firstly, the chief among the causes of this problem is lack of communication. In previous centuries people used to talk to each other in their free time. Nowadays, many kids spend their leisure time with computers, mobile phones, and social media instead of family members. Secondly, another contributing factor is that modern work life has become fast, busy, and more competitive. Correspondingly, people tend to spend their time at work to provide their family with a luxurious life at the cost of emotions and time, which are necessary to maintain the family.
There are different effective solutions to solve this problem. To address its root causes, the governments should start with regulating timing of all offices. By doing so, people can spend more time with their families. Apart from this, the local communities and organizations should arrange events and games which may enhance family relationships and strengthen their bonds. One further measure would be parents teaching the importance of family and relations to kids and limiting their time spent on technological devices.
To conclude, moral values given by parents and participation of the whole family in games and events can be beneficial in dealing with this issue. If families and governments implement these solutions, divorce rates would soon experience a fall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77023542461 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6329541988 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249922749044 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880711683655 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792846382166 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172865935909 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744616212215 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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