Childhood period is the peerless delightful span in this globe to every one which is the yardstick to decide the future of human beings in terms of morality, integrity and liability. However, certain people say giving money to infants weekly may help them to enhance the capability in older, it seems quit contrary to the present situation and the reasons are summarized below.
The first and foremost, during the infancy, the children are always keen on to do certain things by imitating from their siblings or other neighbourhood children and they do not know the consequence of their doings whether it is right or wrong. Meanwhile if the parents are giving money for their daily wages, they will spend as much as they know with their friends due to the lacking knowledge of evaluating money, sometimes which will pave the way to adverse deeds. For instance, the famous quote indicates this that the abundance of anything never teach the liability instead of this may lead to astray way.
Certainly, it is undeniable fact that parents should afford somewhat money to their infants for their daily needs, because, certain children do not spend everything lieu of that they are saving the cash for giving gifts to friends or parents, which is the adorable habit amid this hectic world and also they can manage their requirements by learning the responsibility from separating the derived bucks from their beloved ones. But, the regrettable thing is the proportion of this sort of toddlers is indeed low due to the alluring advertisements and trends.
To conclude this, to live in this world with lot of enjoyments in babyhood period, money is the most prominent thing when it is available at regulated manner from their parents they can glow in this society at present and also in future.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95364238411 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54480485558 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.7711609638 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.0 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170588720029 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671556916244 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559349434532 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969926155193 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403830602784 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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