Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For last one decade, more and more people are traveling in groups to countries for reasons such as pilgrimage, excursion, see monuments etc… resulting, demand of tour guide also has increased in multifold. Some people believe that tour guide should be essential part of tour planning where as others do not see much value addition of these. I believe that tour guide provides the insight information regarding places and make sure everyone involved in activities.
People who do not see guide as must have members in tour activities have some valid reason. Firstly, tour guides in some countries are not regulated and their skill level to interact with group or individual is found abysmally low. As a result, visitors do not understand the stories about the cities, historical places etc. For example, tour guide profession is not respectable in India and no government body has control on these people so in most of places, unemployed youth with no or less education become tour guide. Secondly, it has also been observed that some tour guides are involved in cheating, theft and other unlawful activities and most of the victims are foreigners who come to visit the country, particularly individual travel are badly affected and sometimes they get killed as well.
However, there is no denial that tour guide have most basic information about the local environment and add different flavors in travelling. Tour guide are generally the local people who are born and brought-up at that place which not only have the key facts about the places which are available on internet also but also the special knowledge about the place or culture. For instance, one of the seven wonders “Taj Mahal” story is in books and internet but additionally I was told the key insight such as timing of death and people present at that time. Furthermore, guide also protects the foreign people from local dangers.
To conclude, traveling in a group works as shield from local threats exists in countries and people manage to solve these problems by helping each other. Beside this, tour guide may be helpful for key insight and provide native information about the places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ould be essential part of tour planning where as others do not see much value addition o...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the places') or simply say ''most places''.
Suggestion: most of the places; most places
... body has control on these people so in most of places, unemployed youth with no or less educa...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...n most of places, unemployed youth with no or less education become tour guide. Se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04735376045 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5643660395 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5695231872 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114620495557 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047299003437 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316086558264 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078916228048 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435700512807 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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