Do you believe that societies ought to enforce capital punishment or Are there alternative forms of punishment that would be better used?
What is your opinion?
Nowadays, we see an increase in crime rate. To control such heinous crime capital punishments is significant. although there are alternatives used. In my opinion, another measures are possible to reduce such crimes.
Crime rate in India has increased significantly from last decade. It's been observed that crime rate are comparatively low in capital punishment than where it's not. Thus, it clearly denotes that the fear in people getting executed and that fears helps in reducing the crime rate.
However, capital punishment itself won't decrease the crime rates. In that case many serious crimes wouldn't be still existed in developed and developing countries. Multiple factors seen during a crime by law regulators. In Gulf countries, especially Dubai people are charged for smallest ignorance such as dirtying the public place. If India adopt such strict laws from them there would be a decrease in serious crime.
One of the main reasons of increase in crime rates is easy accessibility. laws in many countries are so liberal that people can easily come out of them. In developing countries we see many serious crimes happening even though there is a strong penal system. government should investigate the reasons behind such crimes. In developing countries crimes are executed due to unemployment, poverty etc. If government create more jobs, give basic educations free to poor people children then there could be decrease in crime rates.
In conclusion, there are several reasons behind increase in crime rates. although some people insist that death penalty is the best way to tackle the problem, I agree with the argument that other measures are also required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34831460674 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65145262314 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9876758592 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.35 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829913239028 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313319365346 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469761994229 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542242096514 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449357279317 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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