In this contemporary Era working before joining post kendry education can play a vital role in life of learners there are lot of peoples who believe that working before doing their education can help them gaine experience for plant studies their food I strongly believe working can help in individual become ready for universi study and this essay I will discuss reasons and give suitable examples.
To comments with firstly teenagers become mature and broad minded individual who start working early before getting admitted to their academic institution can become broad minded and mature enough to choose their career path for instance a survey done by Oxford University 85% of students become broad minded and mature before starting there high education secondary people who work before starting can be more often 2 hours affecting challenges and also learn great leadership skills.
In addition doing job before entering college can improve social abilities in communicating with pears as they can enhance the tool of collaboration with each other moreover Scholars become independent and also give gain confidence however working before starting higher education helps to developersal and professional skills class but not least learners also learn money management skills.
To conclude that teenager become mature and broad minded secondly Scholars became independent and gain confidence a strongly agree students need to open up working before attending University to make themselves ready for future challenges
- Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study Why Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice 78
- Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it what do you think is the reason Discuss possible solutions and provide examples 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55793991416 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57608708113 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.907255047 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 323.75 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.25 20.7667163134 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.25 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204049799036 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130367503815 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482880437491 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130367503815 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482880437491 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.0946893788 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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