Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Nowadays, Computers and Internet which is one of the emerging technology is overtaking the existing source of information i-e books or any written based information. People feel ease and more likely use technologies to find information for themselves instead of other sources which is not getting shrinking. We will further discuss it in future.
To begin with, It is obvious that technologies like internet and computer, getting dominated over other sources of information. As the use of technology for informative purpose becoming easier for people who wants to change themselves according to the technological world. Additionally, It connects you with the world and always be the fastest way to be linked with the globe. But , this need to be in mind that internet availability could be an issue, too. Still there exist some places, for example in Pakistan, many villages are there where internet or electricity is a serious problem, Secondly you cannot take your computer everywhere as it will be difficult for the one who is moving one place to another.
In contrast, Information source that relates to newspaper, book or any other written based media is always used to be friendly, as it attracts people more, comparatively, to others that rely on technology, Still people exist which only believe to study written based information or books because you are more focused, instead of to sit in front of screen, Moreover, you don't need any specific condition to have them just buy and take them easily wherever you can. To take a case, In rural areas most of the countries don't have services for internet and sometime electricity as well, or hardly any of them are having computer technology which is one the main aspect people belonging to to those areas try to have information by using books or any published material and that is the reason why there are always attached to the books.
Indeed, no doubt that internet technology is one of the demanding tool for grabbing information, However, it is outweighing all other tools like we discussed earlier; paper based knowledge. As, it is known to be sea of knowledge or information these days that include every field whether it is of Engineering area, Doctor or whoever wants it. Despite , information based on paper or books is still known to be one of the easiest and reader-friendly source in terms of convenient, easily accessible. That is why, library is one of the evidence of consider-ability of books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in contrast, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01703163017 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89210966582 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.054105007 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.285714286 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3571428571 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222662584152 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752431567618 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513232929903 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142254524867 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451381285262 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.