Don’t you think older people should practice more physical activities regularly in order to keep them healthy? I strongly agree with the fact that every person including the older generation should involve in any kind of physical activities daily. This essay will discuss the importance of elderly people doing exercise daily and how they can practice this an daily habit.
At the outset, there are numerous factors which contribute to older generation healthiness but the utmost factor lies the fact of how frequently they follow physical activities. For example a recent study demonstrates that 80% of time persons who are engaging in some kind of sport or go to gym are less likely to suffer from chronic diseases such as diabetes or heart diseases.
Notwithstanding the fact that utmost people are less likely to engage in a daily exercise routine, as their physical strength is degraded due to age. However, when it comes to some physical activities they do not require much physical strength such as walking which help not only to regain physical health but also mental health. As an illustration, studies reveal that 80% of older people in Europe consider walking not as a physical activity but as a hobby. Therefore, the importance of obtaining physical activity such as walking at an older age is undeniable.
After analyzing the above facts, it can be concluded that there is clear evidence older people should follow an exercise routine in order to refrain from any physical or mental ill health, although the less physical strength should not be overlooked.
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- Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise However many older people do not take enough exercise What could be the reasons for this What can be done to encourage them to take exercise 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... order to keep them healthy? I strongly agree with the fact that every person including the older genera...
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Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...se daily and how they can practice this an daily habit. At the outset, there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, therefore, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0888030888 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62901193628 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.230660416 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202814863683 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907695261258 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672012254908 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141094669348 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802060442897 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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