Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
Do you agree with this?
Healthcare professionals should be more accountable and provide some healthy advice along with the other chemical treatments in order to enhance patients’ lives. In fact, I strongly concur that physicians should explore some healthy tips for their patients as a part of the treatment. This essay aims to list some points that support my argument in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To commence with, there is no doubt that doctors or any person who works in the medical field are highly trusted by regular people. First of all, many people considered doctors as the most reliable sources of scientific information. therefore, most of the patient prefer to ask them plenty of questions, listen carefully to their hints and try to follow their instructions. Thus, physicians generally have a conspicuous influence and respect by people and they can persuade them to do a plethora of healthy activities such as quitting smoking.
Second of all, lots of treatments need to be accompanied by some healthy activities. For instance, cardio diseases and diabetes patients should not rely on medications only, but, they should amend their life-style completely by doing some sports and eating certain healthy diets. therefore, physicians should educate and clarify the entire treatment plan and explain the significance of following it for their patients.
Nevertheless, doctors are exceedingly busy by serving other patients and unfortunately have a limited time to answer the patients’ questions. therefore, they might answer the most important questions and leave the rest to the medical information staff in order to help them.
To sum up, doctors are playing a crucial role in maintaining people’s lives therefore, they are considered as an extremely trustable source of information for lots of individuals. Furthermore, some of these diseases need a clear treatment advice plan along with medications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52666666667 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03281314221 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9870031004 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254908143023 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841699715638 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630609283517 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133945112648 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649083351692 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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