Due to the use of computers and mobile phones, letters writing ability is disappearing.
To what extent do you agree?
Writing the letters have been an incredible part of formal and informal communication since a long. In the present era of computers and electronic gizmos like mobile phones, letter writing capability has witnessed a nose dive. I strongly agree with this notion which will be justified and explained in below mentioned paragraphs.
Undoubtedly, with the advent of information technology and communication science, the world is progressing and reaching the acme of success. It has been a wildest nightmare to do even simple arithmetic without electronic devices. What a herculean task it was to store the heaps of files in office work. Moreover, mobile phones have connected the kith and kins even at a distance of hundreds of miles. Video calls, nowadays, have been a part and parcel of life of all and sundry using internet services on computers and cellular phones.
On the contrary, with the above mentioned technical developments, the extinction of certain potentials of humans has been the outcome and letter writing is one of them. It was believed that a letter portrays the character- sketch of a person as the emotions and sentiments were being displayed through them. Secondly, the on-line writing merely takes few minutes whereas writing on a paper used to take hours and hence, thought to be a tedious and time consuming task, these days.
It can be concluded that although the scientific and electronic gadgets have simplified our life and lead us to prosperity, yet a number of skills including letter writing are being ignored and slowly disappearing in so called technical revolution that is blocking the mental development of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...aching the acme of success. It has been a wildest nightmare to do even simple ari...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a letter portrays the character- sketch of a person as the emotions and sentimen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16417910448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85900772129 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1097262586 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20540764499 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668851811873 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510938108791 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114352016931 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513999351309 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.