The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, technology has not only made it possible for each and eveyone to travel across the world but also, it has brought the entire world to your disposal through defferent type of media platforms. In this essay we will weigh the merits and demerits of this advancement.
Though, travelling around the world is easier than ever, staying in other country may give them the feeling of not belonging to the place and home sick. For example, a person who travels to the part of the world where his region language is not spoken, he may feel isolated and depressed.
However, the convenience of moving around the world has done more good to the people than harm. Humans can now trade and make resources available. For example, a country with low spieces cultivation and import it from another nation to meet the need of their population, and also can sell resource which are available in abandom quantitiy in their country.
Moreover, people get to learn from different type of culture around the world and benefit from them. For instant, other countries can take advantage of herb medicine from asian countries, and in asian nations can learn about the better lifestyles.
In conclusion, i believe the merits of availablity of the conveniece to travel around the globe and be able to share culture through various media platfroms has overshadowed the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00873362445 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53584361719 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8344480052 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237761587541 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835953064764 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497817375617 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114285732911 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333017426237 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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