Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and give your opinion
It is evident that consuming excessive amount of sugar has detrimental effects on human body. Although some people believe that it is government duty to control sugar consumption, others argue that every person should care for themselves and thus eat healthy food.
On the one hand, government has the power and resources to raise awareness in the society. First of all, it can use the media to broadcast information about how eating too much sugar can be bad for our health. Secondly, schools can be forced to have health classes as the number of student struggling with diabetes is rising dramatically. In addition, laws can be set to ban companies from advertising their sugary products on TV or billboards to decrease the persuasion.
On the other hand, in the end it is up to the individuals to care for themselves and pay close attention to their diets. No kind of authority no matter how powerful can order people how to live or what to eat. There is no law regarding humans eating habits. As a matter of fact, ones must have the freedom to choose ones' lifestyles. Therefore, if people want to have healthy body, they should take responsibility for their actions and stop blaming it on others since they are the ones holding the keys to their health. For instance, they can start by replacing foods containing added sugar by natural sweetener which have the same taste but cause less harm.
In conclusion, however government can play an important role in raising awareness by the help of its various resources, people are the one who make the last decision on what they eat and how much they consume sugar. Hence, in my opinion it is one's responsibility to be cautious with one's diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80612244898 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64952013813 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9056266644 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291286356002 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918402419896 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728409294276 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18766347917 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580340359383 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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