Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree?
The ever-changing nature of the modern, knowledge-based societies of the 21st century has led to prolonged education period, formerly a limited period to earn qualifications for a profession. This lifelong quest of knowledge is a ramification of the unprecedented development in science and technology, hence it is inevitable to my perception.
The change in the trend of training in most modern societies is clearly observed yet not appreciated wholeheartedly. Due to the long time, sometimes a lifetime, allocated to training, many people seem hesitant to approve of this new fashion. They argue that the time could be spent on others aspects of life such as quality family time and leisure time. Moreover, the pressure and the tension imposed on an individual, an inevitable byproduct of learning process, is a serious drawback, making it even less popular in the eyes of some people.
On the other hand, living in a modern society requires certain alterations, constant training being of the most significant ones. In a modern community citizens are defined by their careers to a great extent. Therefore, anyone who is interested in gaining a better position, needs to make sure that he is on the path to improvement. Of course, it cannot be denied that a more successful and satisfying occupation leads to a life with higher standards and better quality. Moreover, there is more to learning and training than mere promotions. Human mind needs to be stimulated constantly to reach its maximum potential. No matter how challenging a training course appears to the learners, the goal of triggering the brain is achieved during a learning process. There is ample scientific evidence to approve the fact that learning new things helps one to keep an open mind. Not only will an individual enjoy the benefits of the acquired knowledge and hands-on skills, but also will take advantage of the learning methods, problem solving strategies and lateral thinking which are gained through the process.
Considering the discussed points, it is fair to say that the benefits of lifelong trainings are far more remarkable that the few challenges on the way. Living in a modern society requires adapting to the new conditions and sticking to unbending conventional ideas is neither helpful nor possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...significant ones. In a modern community citizens are defined by their careers to a great...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, of course, such as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2102425876 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01879091161 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598382749326 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2392798275 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762904825949 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216857970953 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026786659588 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479764433518 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262032054843 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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