Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree.
These days, the job interview is a crucial stage of getting a job which should be considered carefully. Based on various management strategy, employers ask various information for assessing an applicant. Some believe that it is necessary to ask the question that is related to the job, requirements, and skills, whereas others found it helpful to gather some personal information from the applicants.
On the one hand, thanks to the recent development in the management theories, some managers look at to a company as a family that their employees not only work but also live together. So based on this view, some human resource departments ask the applicant to provide some personal information. Actually, they do not intend to lock over your personal life but also the reason is how to provide a proactive and lively company. For example, one the most frequent question which will be asked is what is your favorite colors or sports that makes company capable of how interior design will be formed or which sports facility should be provided for employees. Therefore, the aim of asking such these private questions is absolutely for establishing more productive firm.
On the other hand, some others strongly criticized this approach. They believe that the employers should concentrate on skills and job requirement which every applicant must have and if interviewers ask an unrelated question, they just waste their time and probably do not have an adequate assessment. Moreover, they emphasize that personal questions make job interview more unnatural and sometimes applicants will be unpleasant. For example, if it is asked you why you are married, not only it is not relevant, but also they do not affect positively the applicants.
These arguments will conclude that there is not a single procedure for the job interview, and both of these focus on some information that is needed for making intended progress. But in my opinion, we are living in the company and for more productivity and efficiency, it is necessary that company provide a home not a firm so for this purpose it is necessary to have some personal information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...t. Some believe that it is necessary to ask the question that is related to the job, requirement...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21038961039 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.168831168831 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0857142857143 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0727272727273 0.0501214627716 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0493506493506 0.0437548338989 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0883116883117 0.122226691241 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0415584415584 0.0403226058552 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85167965417 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233766233766 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114285714286 0.0861772015684 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207792207792 0.021408717616 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0311688311688 0.011925033212 261% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2136.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 316.048096192 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08547008547 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364672364672 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296296296296 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239316239316 0.203846283523 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.17094017094 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85167965417 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501424501425 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.6351188195 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0714285714 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1136904728 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.571428571 127.492653851 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 54.7010582011 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.16964285714 1.69124875643 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277931506438 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102286385249 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641859854442 0.0668466124924 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515327834181 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161587842792 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116808662384 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573401675738 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342070189075 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390065167679 0.0638462369009 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206777665532 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414050761841 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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