Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Information about employee is always necessary for the person who is offering jobs but which type of personal information will be given that is a matter of debate. Knowing favorite pastime or marital status is helpful to allot tasks while most of the time it is needless as most of the tasks are not dependent on these information. In my opinion, mentioning information is necessary which are directly relevant for the job.
Primarily, recruiters in their job advertisement mention some points that should mentioned in the job application. For example, education qualification, work experience, achievements etc. are important to asses a person and these data are necessary for a CV that will be dropped for particular job. Now a days, for the application, summary of candidates is asked where specific requirements are mentioned. All these systems are good as these help to save time.
On the other hand, some job advertisers do not like to give any format for their job application. When a candidate wants to apply for these job, they like to mention every information. For example, for the entry post of a job it is very natural that an applicant wants to give more information as they do not know which information is needed and which are not.
Furthermore, it is very clear that if the employers want, they can reduce the dilemma about information. But for some jobs, it is important to know about marital status. For example, in military service it is important to be single for long course military training. Besides, tours and travel companies are always asked for hobbies and interests, as they are directly related with jobs.
In conclusion, it is always essential for the employers to ask for relevant information from job applicants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... most of the tasks are not dependent on these information. In my opinion, mentioning information ...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...hat will be dropped for particular job. Now a days, for the application, summary of candid...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...will be dropped for particular job. Now a days, for the application, summary of candid...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformation is needed and which are not. Furthermore, it is very clear that if th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00684931507 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91644929446 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510273972603 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8763837356 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336401497164 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124195575483 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648588900224 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214153811549 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349640457733 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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