Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies or interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
companies often inquire persons have appled for job about their private life like there free time activities, and either they are married or unmarried.although, most of them consider that this knowledge may be applicable and purposeful but some notagree with this opinion.personal information like their interests and hobbies which help them to some extent judge the people and their abilities and marraige information help them build perception of how much time a person give to that job .and how much that work demands which in term assist them to choose a right candidate for that job.
however, knowlede related to once own activities recieve some view aboutperson like for HR or marketing department more efficent and active member require a person that is antisocial and social media driven is not suitable.similarily, having habbit of reading support their intelluctual and creative approach.
in the same way, marraige information of candidate is also excuate that availability of time which he give that job .like marraige persons have many responsibilities of their family and provide less time ascompare to single.most of the companies perfer unmarried because they give more time and attention to work but, at the sametime some organisitions consider married. because they are more mature and stable in life.on the other hand married personal have more trables in their life so they give less time to job.
most of the factories inquire about thepersonal information like life activities and their relationalship status.which help them to develop some concept bout that candiate about its work and personal life managment.in my point of view they are useful and important for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33208955224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03542196046 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.400687756 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.8 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233353730594 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126797211613 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063073504823 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136877867165 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667591619244 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 13.0946893788 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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