Environmental problem such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days. The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution.
why is it so? and how can this problem be solved?
It is undeniable that the eco-system is being increasingly affected due to various factors such as pollutions, emission of gases, and deforestation to name a few which results in global warming. The government has amended rules and regulations internationally to tackle this issue but they did not yield the desired outcome.
To begin with, even though the government is held responsible to solve this issue, I believe in this matter the society plays a key role as well and is one end of the rope. Firstly, governments are responsible for the uncontrolled influx of vehicles in their countries. A study and illustrated, over 70% of the air pollution is caused by the emission of harmful gases as the result of burning fossil fuels. Furthermore, industrial complexes are the main source of harmful waste products, such as their sewages which drain in rivers or unsupervised disposal of waste bi-products of factories which affect the eco-system drastically. Moreover, the migration of people from less dense parts of the country to urban cities has lead rise in demand for land, thus, deforestation occurs to acquire more land to build skyscrapers.
However, in order to eradicate this issue, both the society and the government need to work hand in hand with respective new regulations in every aspect which is harmful to the environment. The government can implement stricter rules for land expansion, for instance, in Vancouver- Canada, the forest around the city is protected by law and any construction would be challenged as illegal vandalization of the forest followed by heavy penalties. Furthermore, it is time to step away from traditional fossil fuels causes degradation of air quality and move to clean energies such as water and sun which eliminate the exhaust fumes of the factories.
To conclude, the environment is being affected detrimentally on daily bases by pollutions and the government and the people need to work together to prevent further damage to the eco-system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20807453416 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05620516838 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7833287992 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.454545455 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137676990739 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501176125835 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331600862867 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885311493738 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325447076225 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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