Articles in the Internet and stories from book are frequently accompanied with pictures. Indeed pictures provide a vivid vision of information, which implies that picture is more effective than word in expression. However, I think that picture is just a complementary to words and words are the main source to convey information.
To start with, picture tenders a vivid description. A picture proffers a detailed image of what descripted in an article or a story. For example, a sketch in story can show background, people and event in a scene from a perspective. Nonetheless, a serial of pictures without description in word transmit no fixed meaning, which is subjected to views's interpretation. Therefore, picture is merely a complementary to words.
Words are the main source to convey information. A title in an article indicates what is the topic. Introduction paragraph introduces the background of the article and body paragraphs expound details of it. A whole article conveies the specific and detailed information of an event, an idea or a report. Definitely a picture compliments the expression of words. Nevertheless, words can transmit meaning accurately without a picture attached to it. Thus, words are the main source to convey information.
In conclusion, words are more effective in expression than picture. Picture is only s complementary to words, eventhough it reveals a vivid image of the content. However, words are the dominant conveyer of information because picture expresses no stationary meaning without a description in words.
- Some people think that men and women are different so men are more suitable for certain jobs and are the same with women. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer more science fiction.To what extend do you agree with such a procedure? Have you 67
- The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report to the university lecture 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 55
- You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and•Give your rea 38
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...e frequently accompanied with pictures. Indeed pictures provide a vivid vision of info...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43032786885 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26213804301 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495901639344 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7321066164 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6111111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5555555556 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162744208747 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606776422987 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479775731835 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118166091238 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427167864372 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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