Nowadays, The increasing rate of people are suffering from diseases due to more junk food intake. Most of the people are hectic because of their work and life style. This leads to increase of having the fast-food in many countries. For reducing this kind of situation, Government can impose the highest tax on fast food but other options are also need to implement. I agree the above option but this action cannot treated as primary solution. In this essay, I will discuss the some other options to avoid this drastic situation.
In this modern technology, leading fast paced lifestyle and this situation are compelled people to having hectic life style. In this life style, they do not have the time for cooking. Therefore, this ends to having Jung food as a prominent habit. Fast food causes increasing of fats and the obesity of all aged people especially youngsters. To eliminate this phenomena, Government can impose higher tax on junk food. This action will reduce the habit of having junk food by poor people but the higher tax will effect to development and job opportunity of food industry in the country.
Moreover, Government and other organizations should initiate the different campaign to gather the knowledge of having healthy food and will encourage or motivate the people to cook by-self. Another point is that to open up the availability of healthier food in easier way that's also leads to reduce the junk food consumption.
In conclusion, Imposing higher tax is not a primary solution for reducing having junk food. Government should provide facility for healthy food and awareness of fast food disadvantages.
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Essay topics: In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agre 73
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09293680297 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65683372308 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524163568773 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4537638397 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346106193445 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143433042381 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699703959258 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23162103479 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676442249514 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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