Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Many people believe that although globalization is undoubtedly, the most significant and inevitable factor of growth in the overall economic development of an economy while it's side-effects cannot be ignored. It seems to me that globalization does have some negative aspects, and I will explain why in this essay.
Perhaps one of the most important and significant factor of globalization is international trade agreement between two nations which can have a detrimental effect on the economy. Firstly, Developed nations can easily setup their own manufacturing plants in developing countries without any compliance to abide. In addition to this, they do not provide hygienic and proper working conditions to the people of the host country which can be a cause for certain catastrophic diseases like cholera and typhoid etc. to human beings. For Instance, a recent study by the WEF suggest that 60% workers in China operate in poor and unhygienic working conditions.
Secondly, By entering into bilateral trade agreement developing nations expose their natural resources which are often exploited by the developed nations by sending their resources to manage them. Furthermore, the natural resources become readily available for advanced countries at any time of the day.
Thirdly, Cultural Differences can affect the business communication between two employees of the same company which can be a cause of conflict because of the misunderstanding in the cultural differences of what is wrong and what is right.
However, One should ignore the positive aspects of the globalization which helps to improve the overall standard of living of individuals and society. Furthermore, it has a direct co-relation with the Gross Domestic Product of the Economy although it is exclusive of taxes and other charges.
Overall, it appears that government should do some ground work before entering into any of the international agreement with developed nations while making sure that they have some pre-defined rules and regulations for developed nations to follow if they open the operations in the host country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 52, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: groundwork
... appears that government should do some ground work before entering into any of the interna...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49079754601 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03551437946 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2722983863 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.692307692 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105524804773 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366603872078 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441443411369 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589597287041 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562038984859 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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