Health is the fundamental right of human being. Every nations in this growing technological era, should be provided basic health care for free. I am totally agree with this point health is wealth. In the below essay we will enlighten some initiative that government can do for its nation.
Firstly, the minimal services on health care should be provided free of cost to everyone. The ,main reason is people often do not bother to visit doctor in case of minor infection, to avoid the registration fee, consultation fee and medicinal charges. Thus offering the first aid at free of cost would aware people and the dangerous deseases can be curbed. For instance, person with diabetes at the early stage can be treated with some medications, but if neglected can affect the renal failure, cardiac arrest , stroke , which in turn needs a surgery, which some people can not afford and eventually died.
Secondly, for the unemployed and elderly people who hardly have any income for their survival, would not be able to pay such hefty amount of treatment of any kind of illness. Age comes with many defficiencies in the body. On the other hand, the major treatments can be evaluated and concessions can be given to people who are deprived.
To sum up, every individual represents its country and a healthy person can contribute towards the economy of the nation. More healthier the human is, more productive it can become, and this can happen with great support of government.
- Healthcare should always be funded by governments and it should be always be free for people to use To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea 56
- Modern communications mean that it s no longer necessary to write letters To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Every country should have a free health service even if tlJis means thatthe latest medical treatments may not be available through the servicebecause they are too expensive Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- In many countries very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 84
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stages'' or 'stage's'?
Suggestion: stages'; stage's
...ial stages. For example, in the initial stages diabetes is not an expensive disease to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, at least, for example, of course, in any case, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15343915344 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85190093311 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478835978836 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5222565621 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182888387269 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700322524696 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436317765434 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136252470566 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605997912955 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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