It is the government's responsibility to provide free health and care services to its citizens because a healthy person can make a meaningful contribution to society and help its country in terms of development and advancements in this competitive world. I strongly agree with this notion and I will discuss how a country can maintain a good balance between healthcare-related schemes for its citizens in the following essay.
To commence with, in many developing nations, a plethora number of people cannot afford simple treatments for common ailments. In this case, free healthcare services should be provided for the sicknesses such as fever, cold, and cough. This happens mainly due to the lack of resources for income and unhealthy living conditions. For example, slum areas are affected by poor sanitary and cleaning conditions which makes people victims of many easily avoidable diseases. Therefore, it is legitimate for the authorities to provide free healthcare facilities in these regions.
On the other hand, people living in big cities usually need assistance with complex and costly treatments. So, if free medical services are provided in the metropolises but the latest treatments are excluded from them it might become counterproductive. For instance, a person living in a big city rarely visits to doctor for common illnesses. If unfortunately, the same person has issues with his severe diseases like heart-related problems, a stomach infection where he would need a complex medical procedure which requires a huge sum of the medical expense, and he can only afford with the medical policy.
In conclusion, even though many people believe in equal and free treatment for all medical problems, policies should be formulated based on the condition of people living in a particular territory. Thus, I firmly concur that the government should not only provide free medical services but also make novel medicaments for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
It is the governments responsibility to provide free health a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37254901961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02926898578 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.588407118 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190049541649 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720703513825 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647377614356 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123286794095 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340461085641 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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